Cool poem, it was short, but it explained the piece nicely. I really think you should extend it though so people can get the full feel of what you think about the piece.
I really liked this poem even though it was short. I think that by keeping it short you added a really cool effect to it that threw what you wanted the reader to get out of it at them almost immediately. I really do like it.
Cool poem, it was short, but it explained the piece nicely. I really think you should extend it though so people can get the full feel of what you think about the piece.
ReplyDeleteI really liked this poem even though it was short. I think that by keeping it short you added a really cool effect to it that threw what you wanted the reader to get out of it at them almost immediately. I really do like it.
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